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Thursday, October 15, 2009

'ts u hun!!

Why did i let u go,
why did i let u go
Dnt remember the lsat tym
I saw a smile on ma face
sumone gave me a hug
or visited me at my place
Unbearable numbness creeping into ma veins
Alwayz feel the bone dry sense even in a heavy rain
Can u explain me,Plz lemme knw
Wht did i do wrng?? tht made u leave me 'n go?
but here cums the angels
on behalf of the god
I knew i cant take it to maself
'n cann't stop thnking of
U ma gurl its just u who makes me feel grt
makes me feel i can fly
makes me feel i cnt die
'ts u gurl just u who makes me feel i m rite
even whn the wrld is against me
'n the wind isn't blowing on ma side
U knw 'ts u grl jst u who makes me so complete
tht i dnt thnk 'bt ma limbs
or nethng else that surrounds me

It feels as gud as u are rite here with me
Holding ma handstaking me across the sea
I dnt wanna open ma eyes coz\Even if 'ts a dream,
It's all i wanna see
It's all i wanna see
Whole ma life long, gurl!
It's all i wanna see!

3 comments:

kiran said...

awwwiiieee!:D

RASHMI RAO said...

You write really well..!
But you know what try and get your english writing right. Its actually very distressing to see you use some "punk" language like 'wanna' , 'mah'..
It goes to show that you re a lazy writer.
I am not criticizing , I am just suggesting, because once upon a time I wrote just like you and someone told me that my writings were "garish"..:-P

Anonymous said...

Awesome!! is also a lil too small word to say...